Duke Writing Studio 3
o Explain why you have chosen to discuss these
specific elements. In other words, explain the
significance of your choices for your main claim.
You may decide to incorporate a quotation
from the artist to support your descriptive
choices. For example: “In the corner of the
painting, the barely perceptible outline of a
woman can be seen against a latticed
background. The vagueness of her presence
is necessary, as Bonnard noted in one of his
notebooks, because: ‘A figure should be part
of the background against which it is placed
[Figure 5].’”
4
o Discuss the relationship among visual elements of
the art work: “The admirable calligraphy of the text
sharply contrasts the paucity of craftsmanship of the
sculpture [Figure 6].”
5
Use vocabulary words mentioned in class. Foreshortening, linear perspective, and cross-hatching are
some examples. Be sure to incorporate only those terms appropriate to your object.
If your assignment asks you to identify the style or
movement associated with the artwork, you can explore this
connection by comparing the artwork’s formal elements to the
stylistic characteristics that you have learned in class. For
example: “Robert Adam’s library at Kenwood is quite classical,
not just because of the Corinthian columns and barrel vaults, but
also because it is symmetrical, geometric, and carefully balanced
[Figure 7].”
6
You may be asked to situate your art object in its historical
context. Ask yourself what the viewer needs to know about the
time period in order to understand this artwork.
o This may include biographical data about the artist,
information about how the artwork was received in its time, or
important framing of the social, political, or economic contexts
of the time.
o As in your formal analysis, choose evidence that
supports your main claim.
Helpful Links
Writing in the Disciplines: Art History:
http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/arthistory.html
Overview: Visual Rhetoric /Visual Literacy:
4
Laure de Buzon-Vallet and Claude Laugier, in Sasha Newman, ed., Bonnard: The Late Paintings (Paris: Centre
Georges Pompidou, 1984) 198.
5
Denise Schmandt-Besserat, When Writing Met Art: from Symbol to Story (Austin: University of Texas Press, 2007)
95.
6
Penelope J.E. Davies, et. al., Jansen’s History of Art: The Western Tradition (Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice
Hall, 2007).
Figure 4: Vincent van Gogh,
Dr. Gachet (1890)
Figure 5: Pierre Bonnard, Dining Room
overlooking the Garden (1930-1)